Post by Brave on Jan 6, 2012 22:57:09 GMT -5
~Prolouge~
A dark brown shape stood over the body of a white she-cat, whose eyes were staring up at the darkening sky. The cat was a dark brown tom, the tom smiled evilly as blood dripped from his sharp bloodied teeth. The white she-cat had a deep tare in her throat, blood dripped from her lips, staining the grass. The tom felt as if he had control over everything and unusually carefree. A larger, darker, shadow appeared behind the dark brown tom, “Good job, Hawkstar, you have done well,” The dark shadow whispered into Hawkstar’s ear. In an instance, the dark shadow faded. Hawkstar swiped his tongue over his jaw, licking the blood of himself. Just for a moment, the dark brown tom was replaced with a larger brown cat with red eyes and a long scar down it’s side.
Chapter 1
Hawkstar felt a horrid pain shoot through his entire body as the badger crushed his neck. The dark brown tom collapsed as the badger let go. Gasping for breath, Hawkstar struggled to his paws, but a wave of darkness overtook him. For a moment, the dark brown tom caught sight of Starclan’s hunting grounds, but then it vanished and was replaced by the image of blood gushing from his kneck and yowls of horror, but still he couldn’t move and he could hear the yowls and pain fading for a moment, before his whole body convulsed into spasms. I’m dying over and over, losing all my lives. . Is this what….what Iceheart felt when I killed her? Horror and pain filled Hawkstar as another spasm racketed his body. W-why, why is this happening to me? Could it be…….Could it be my punishment, for killing Iceheart ? If so, will I be in Starclan or in a darker place where evil cats go? As Hawkstar lost his last life, a million thoughts surged through his mind like a river spilling over.
Hawkstar blinked open his eyes to find himself in a dark and misty forest, the dark brown tom tried to look through the overhanging branches to try and see a single star, but the branches were too thick. This is….is this? Is this, the, Place of No Stars? Can it really be? Wasn’t my punishment for killing Iceheart, was to lose all my lives at once? Why is this happening to me?
A dark brown shape stood over the body of a white she-cat, whose eyes were staring up at the darkening sky. The cat was a dark brown tom, the tom smiled evilly as blood dripped from his sharp bloodied teeth. The white she-cat had a deep tare in her throat, blood dripped from her lips, staining the grass. The tom felt as if he had control over everything and unusually carefree. A larger, darker, shadow appeared behind the dark brown tom, “Good job, Hawkstar, you have done well,” The dark shadow whispered into Hawkstar’s ear. In an instance, the dark shadow faded. Hawkstar swiped his tongue over his jaw, licking the blood of himself. Just for a moment, the dark brown tom was replaced with a larger brown cat with red eyes and a long scar down it’s side.
Chapter 1
Hawkstar felt a horrid pain shoot through his entire body as the badger crushed his neck. The dark brown tom collapsed as the badger let go. Gasping for breath, Hawkstar struggled to his paws, but a wave of darkness overtook him. For a moment, the dark brown tom caught sight of Starclan’s hunting grounds, but then it vanished and was replaced by the image of blood gushing from his kneck and yowls of horror, but still he couldn’t move and he could hear the yowls and pain fading for a moment, before his whole body convulsed into spasms. I’m dying over and over, losing all my lives. . Is this what….what Iceheart felt when I killed her? Horror and pain filled Hawkstar as another spasm racketed his body. W-why, why is this happening to me? Could it be…….Could it be my punishment, for killing Iceheart ? If so, will I be in Starclan or in a darker place where evil cats go? As Hawkstar lost his last life, a million thoughts surged through his mind like a river spilling over.
Hawkstar blinked open his eyes to find himself in a dark and misty forest, the dark brown tom tried to look through the overhanging branches to try and see a single star, but the branches were too thick. This is….is this? Is this, the, Place of No Stars? Can it really be? Wasn’t my punishment for killing Iceheart, was to lose all my lives at once? Why is this happening to me?