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Post by Brave on Apr 13, 2012 20:52:16 GMT -5
"My son.......you will do whatever I please with my command," Earthstar gloated, sneering, he added, "And you won't be able to control whether or not you want to!" he added with a flick on his tail. Grinning, Earthstar stepped forward, and into the body of his son, Hawkstar. The brown tom, who was immobilized by fear started shaking uncontrollably. Hawkstar's eyes widened as he gasped for breath. His chest fluttered as he fought for breath, and with one last gasp, his eyes rolled back into his head. Everything went black.
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Post by Eeveegirl on Apr 14, 2012 7:04:16 GMT -5
Woah............ that was..................... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Brave on Apr 14, 2012 8:34:09 GMT -5
Rising Evil *Chapter 1*
Hawkstar's eyes flew open, besides him, his mate Bluestream slept. The brown tom gasped for breath from last night's nightmare. It was just a nightmare, nothing more...... Right? It seemed to real.......But it's impossible, right? Dead cats-or any cat can't just posses you? Hawkstar was plunged back into his dream as his father, Earthstar walked right into his soul, taking control. The brown tom shook his head, trying to clear the dream out of his head. Quietly, Hawkstar got up and walked outside of the den to bright sunshine. He could feel the warmth of the sun on his fur, and could hear kits outside playing. Redpaw, his son emerged from the apprentice's den, yawning. As soon as he emerged, a dark gray she-cat pounced in him from her perch on top of the apprentice's den. Dawnpaw, Redpaw's sister quickly pinned him down.
"Get off me, Dawnpaw!" The tortoiseshell tom snarled, pushing her off. Hawkstar couldn't help but smile in amusement.
"Your no fun, " Dawnpaw quickly argued, tail high, she stalked off. Suddenly, a white she-cat emerged from the warrior's den. Iceheart. Hawkstar could feel the blood roar in his ears. The cat who had been his mate before Bluestream. She had betrayed Hawkstar for Thunderheart, a large dark brown tabby tom. The brown tom glared at Iceheart as she walked past. I wish she was dead! Hawkstar stepped back in surprise at his dark wish.
"If you wish she was dead, why don't you kill her?" A voice all to familiar whispered in his ear, Earthstar. I'm no murderer! I wouldn't kill! "That's too bad, because I can grant your wish, " Earthstar whispered again. No! I don't want her killed! "Too bad, because you won't be able to control yourself, " and with that, Hawkstar felt strange and just like he was listening through his ears and seeing through his eyes but nothing else. He then realized he couldn't move or speak. What's happening to me? He thought, panicking.
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Post by Eeveegirl on Apr 15, 2012 8:09:30 GMT -5
OMG OMG OMG KEEP WRITING!
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Post by Brave on Apr 15, 2012 11:37:18 GMT -5
Rising Evil Chapter 2
What's happening to me? The thought repeated itself again as he realized he was advanceing towards Iceheart. No! Hawkstar fought for control, and for a brief moment, he got back control. But yet again, he lost control. You can't do this! Hawkstar thought, trying to gain back some control. "Yes, I can, " Earthstar answered quickly. When Iceheart saw the brown tom moving towards her, she turned towards him.
"What do you want, Hawkstar?" Iceheart asked, blinking slowly.
"Let's go hunting-" Hawkstar-Earthstar meowed curtly, adding, "By the Warm-rocks, " The brown tom realized in horror what Earthstar was planning. Why can't you just let me control what I do? I'm the Clan leader, not a murderer like you! When Earthstar didn't respond, Hawkstar had givin up hope of gaining any control any time soon. Before the brown tom knew it, he and Iceheart were out in the forest. She said yes! Now Hawkstar knew he had to gain control before Earthstar killed Iceheart! About half-way to the Warm-Rocks, Hawkstar had gained just a moment of control, "Run-" Hawkstar struggled to get out, but all that he managed to get out was more of a high pitched squeak. Once again, Earthstar took control.
Stop trying. Earthstar thought.
No! Never! Hawkstar yowled in his mind.
The Warm-rocks was just a few fox-lengths away, dark caves dotted the rocky clearing. The moment they had reached the Warm-rocks, Earthstar fell in behind of Iceheart, slipping behind a large rock.
"Hawkstar, where'd you go?" The white she-cat wondered, sitting down. As soon as she sat down, Earthstar lunged at Iceheart, pinning her to the ground. Stop! Earthstar, don't kill her! Iceheart struggled under Earthstar, "Hawkstar, what are you doing?" Iceheart pleaded, stalling. The she-cat eye's were widened in fear and horror.
Hawkstar stared into her pleading eyes. Why can't I do anything? Hawkstar raged on in his thoughts. Earthstar raised his paw, unshealthing his long claws and delivering the Death Blow. Iceheart's bloodcurdling scream was cut off as she coughed out blood.
Suddenly Hawkstar gained back control, "Iceheart! No!" he wailed, "I'm sorry!" The brown tom pushed his nose into her flank, "I'm.................sooooooo.........s-sorry, " The brown tom murmered, his eyes filled with grief.
"It's okay...........I-I.......f-forgive......y-y-y-you, " Iceheart croaked, gasping for breath, "I-I know...you couldn't stop it, " And with that, her eyes rolled into her head.
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Post by Eeveegirl on Apr 15, 2012 16:50:05 GMT -5
Did she know Earthstar was controlling him?
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Too Lazy to login in XD
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Post by Too Lazy to login in XD on Apr 16, 2012 16:42:11 GMT -5
Yeah, she could see it in his eyes
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Post by 100icestar on Apr 16, 2012 20:15:15 GMT -5
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more!!
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Post by Eeveegirl on Apr 17, 2012 7:22:07 GMT -5
(Too lazy to login WOW!) Anyways That.Is.So.COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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